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15 May 2017

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Ellie D

Overall really good job on your essay Zoe, one thing that I would fix would just be adding more detail about the rise and fall of the rice paddies. Other than that you did a really good job writing this essay!

Karessa Victor

Zoe, you did a good job with this. It is put together well. I like how you introduced the topic before going ahead and explaining more in detail what it is. You did a good job explaining the "Law of Unintended Consequences" and giving examples. Going forward with your final draft, add more on human activity and how it is beneficial.

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