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15 May 2017

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Zoe R

Ellie, overall you did a really good job on this essay and I like how you talked a lot about the snails, you gave great detail on that. One thing that I would expand more on is the human activity that contributed to the unintended consequences. You did a good job explaining the unintended consequence you just need to add a little more. Other than that great job!

Nyah A

Ellie, good job with this. One thing that I would definitely expand on, is the unintended consequences. I would explain why they are unintended consequences. I would also talk about the human activity that contributed to the unintended consequences.

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